K, Brittney and Brittni. I've done the 2nd and 3rd, hope there aren't too many mistakes. ;) There are 7 documents left, but I can put the remaining doc. into the conclusion. Ummm, if you need help I have a pretty good idea how the remaining paragraphs should go. Don't forget this thing is due Weds!

I did the conclusion. What should be done with the remaining 7 documents?

for the conclusion, "in summation" is a phrase for a debate or speech. i can't really think of a word to replace it though.

I'm almost done. Going to do about two more paragraphs in between the 4th and the conclusion. I should be able to put 6 doc.'s into that.

done

nice use of documents. um, i have to read this more carefully to find any serious critiques.

Hi! I really liked the thesis. everything sounds good to me!

Um...I felt that it was hard to follow, and that the numerous quotes at times detracted from the relevance of the paragraphs. I might need to reread though. But kudos for making the best of a staggering amount of documents, I only had 9 and of that 2 were pictures.

This is a prime DBQ. Very understanding, good use of documents.

The dbq was really good. It had a goo thesis and good following paragraphs. But you all don't have to quote the documetns as you all did. Just say in document 5 it said blah blah blah, not copy a whole 3 sentences from the document.