Perfect, I'd have to really study it to find something wrong.
yeah... really detailed and thorough. Great work!
Don't take all the credit!
I can't really find anything wrong with it. It was easy to follow and had good details. good work.
This looks good to me. Good work.
punctuation. fix it. thats it. i'm out.
this is quite well written and thought out. however, your thesis seems overextended and ostentacious. its a sharp contrast to your conclusion which is both short and simplistic. for consistency's sake perhaps these should be rethought out.